Would you be so kind and correct my english homework? please! it's about readind and books!?

Your text is very good. In the sentence that starts "In german": you need to capitalize German. The sentence "Everytime when fly to another country" should be Everytime "I" fly to another country. There may be some other mistakes (my English is not perfect!) but they are probably very minor as well. I think you will do very well with this homework.